awesome

That was great!

So many videos/games on newgrounds are given 10's all the time and they are crap. I don't think this thing is a 10, but it definitely deserves high scores. Really funny.

great animation, 100 year old sense of humor

I think you were going for an old-timey style, but all the jokes were total 1950's slapstick. There's a reason no one watches Tom and Jerry cartoons anymore. Most people dont laugh at that stuff anymore.

If you think it's funny, that's great.

Very cool.

Hey Jonas,

I liked your game a lot. I didn't get any "message" from it, but the exploration gameplay and subtle puzzles kept me engaged till the end. It's cool how exciting a simple change of color palette can be when colors are so restricted. You definitely explored multiple interesting elements of design here.

My one suggestion would be to experiment with different text being displayed in the game. The "i'm awake", "what will I become" theme definitely set an atmosphere, but I wonder how you could change the feeling of the game just be changing what was in those text boxes. Do you think you could give the game more of a Portal feeling if the lines were like the maze sinisterly talking to you ala GladOS? Or something else.

Anyways, I doubt you actually intended to get a message across, but were more just trying to illicit a specific feeling with the dialogue you chose, and I'd say it worked. But it'd be cool to try experimenting with other stuff.

Needs sound

Hey, nice job creating a solid engine. I would definitely consider adding just 2 things. First, some background music. It's so quiet. Background music helps keep the player excited and feeling good. Second, a noise for when I fire my gun, not just when it hits something. That will make firing the gun feel better. It's also just something us gamers have come to expect.

Think about it.